Sunday, September 20, 2009

The Quiet World.

In an effort to get people to look
into each other's eyes more,
and also to appease the mutes, the government has decided
to allot each person exactly one hundred
and sixty-seven words, per day.

When the phone rings, I put it to my ear
without saying hello. In the restaurant
I point at chicken noodle soup.
I am adjusting well to the new way.

Late at night, I call my long distance lover,
proudly say I only used fifty-nine today.
I saved the rest for you.

When she doesn't respond,
I know she's used up all her words,
so I slowly whisper I love you
thirty-two and a third times.
After that, we just sit on the line
and listen to each other breathe.

- Jeffrey McDaniel

3 comments:

Elizabeth said...

Gawd. I cried. Det var litt for nydelig o:

Merete*-' said...

I totally agree:1
thats love for yah.
lurer på hvormange ord jeg har brukt idag egenltlig, burde ansette noen til å telle. Tror du skriftlige ord tells?

Elizabeth said...

Jeg elsker det diktet her. Jeg blir mer og mer forelsket i det for hver gang jeg leser det!!!<3

(som er hver dag i vente på nytt innlegg. )